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5th & 6th Grade Writing 2009-2010

(Names have been abbreviated to initials.)


AW1 Ten Things

TEN THINGS THAT MAKE ME SMILE
by CC


10. Going on great trips
9. Tasting a sweet smoothie, especially strawberry-banana
8. Taking a bite from a cheeseburger
7. Petting my dog's soft fluffy fur
6. Playing my favorite video games
5. Having my good friends over
4. Smelling the fresh scent of chocolate chip cookies
3. Watching my favorite tv shows
2. Visiting my cousins on the mainland
1. The feeling of getting an awesome grade



AW2 Building Repeating Line

AT THE MALL
by MY


At the mall
At the gigantic mall
At the expensive gigantic mall

You can shop at Guess
Buy the pink diamond necklace
It's 5,000 dollars, but I bought it anyway

At the mall
At the gigantic mall
At the expensive gigantic mall

Find the sequin tank top at Nordstrom
It's in all different colors
Blue, purple and even green

At the mall
At the gigantic mall
At the expensive gigantic mall

For my birthday I got silver earings
They're shaped like flowers and they're glittery
Guess where I got it? THE MALL!!!!



AW5 Noun-Verb

SLEEP OVER
by JP


Day begins
I wait
Friends come
Fun starts
Play games
Watch movies
Eat pizza
Ice cream feast
Bedtime comes
Pillow fight rampage
Giggles start
Parents yell
Night ends
Day begins
Friends go
Fun ends

AT THE ZOO
by BW


Kids walk
Elephants poop
Alligators sleep
Tiger pounces
Manure smells
Turtles hump
Pigs snort
Rhino stinks
Birds squawk
Kids yell
Giraffe eats
Kids play
Animals eat
Kids yawn
Animals sleep
Zoo closes
Kids sleep



AW9 Diary



AW10 Advice Letter

October 21, 2009
Dear, Ms. Evil

I can see that you are a little stressed out from your fifth grade class especially are non-stop talking. So, I would like to pass on some advice. You might think this is a little crazy getting advice from a 10 year old, but it might be worth it some day.

1. Please give us less and easier homework! Some of them are really challenging and hard. For Ms. Iris it would be easier. Why do you hate us?

2. Can you read us more stories and less social studies? We would be more relaxed and happy, both of us. Books are good for the brain.

I hope you take these suggestions into consideration because these might be really useful tips. Hopefully, you read this letter.

Sincerely,
CC



AW14 ERB

My ideal backyard would have a huge, circle-shaped pool. It would have dolphins swimming around the pool over and over again. There would be a central island in the pool with a hammock on the middle of the island. Directly in front of the hammock there would be a smoothie machine that makes the world’s best smoothies tasting of ripe bananas and frozen strawberries. Above the smoothie machine there would be a huge, flat -screen TV. The flat screen TV would have all the channels on digital cable and have direct TV, so I could watch all the best NFL games around the league.

Around the pool, in the backyard, there would be a huge shed in the corner with one of every kind of play-ball in the world. There would be a huge field that could be used as a football field, soccer field and a baseball field. In my best backyard ever, the grass would be so green that if you had a dark-green tennis ball and dropped it, even though the grass would be trimmed perfectly, you would seldom be able to find it again.

Underneath the yard, there would be underground tunnels leading to secret rooms where there are mounds of toys to play with. On the island in the middle of the pool, there would be a huge tube going up toward the sky and there would be an elevator in the middle of the tube. When we reached the top of the tube, attached on top of the tube would be a regulation-size basketball court and fifty basketballs in the cart on the side, so whenever a basketball went over the edge, it could be replaced. There would be a telephone at the side of the basketball court, so whenever we want to play with someone, we can just call them on the telephone so they could come to my house.

When it gets dark, there would be automatic lights all over the backyard that would instantly turn on so we could see. If the lights do not turn on when you want them to, there is a remote that has a button that will instantly turn on all the lights. On the remote there would be ten buttons. The first button would call the chefs who work in the backyard grill house to cook something delicious for me. The second button would turn the huge, high-definition flat-screen TV on. The third button would make the football turn into a soccer field in a matter of seconds! And if you press the button once more the soccer field would turn into a baseball field! The fourth button would make a huge roof come over and protect the basketball court when it is raining so the rain doesn’t ruin the basketball court. The fifth button would the basketball court a huge room without any gravity so I could float around just like I am in space! The sixth button would polish all the balls in the huge shed so they are clean and ready to be played with at any time. The seventh button would automatically build a five hundred foot free-fall water slide going into the pool. The eighth button would be to turn on all the lights in the backyard. The ninth button would be to call the home phone inside the house so I could talk to my parents when I felt like it. And finally the tenth button would be to call nine one one or the cops in case of an emergency.

When I come home from school, I would go straight to the backyard and do my homework in the hammock on the island. When I finished my homework, I would get into my bathing suit, and jump into the pool so I could have a swim with the dolphins. I would ride on the dolphins back watch the ripples go past as I scream with delight. When I get tired of riding with the dolphins, I’d go back to the island, dry off and the go to the football field. I would get a newly polished ball from the shed and practice my field goal kicking. After an hour of that, I would go up to the basketball court and shoot some hoops. Then I’d use the telephone and call some friends so they could come over and play some basketball with me. When my friends and I were sick of playing basketball, we’d go back down to the island in the elevator and then go to the huge shed and pick up a soccer ball. My friends would then say, “Hey, I thought you had a soccer field!” So I would say, “I do,” and the football field would turn into a soccer field and all my friends would gasp in amazement and wonder. Then we would play a game of soccer for the full hour and a half.

When we got tired of that, we went to the backyard grill house to have dinner. It would be delicious. There would be roast steak, grilled chicken and cold turkey smothered in warm gravy. Then for dessert there would be mounds of vanilla ice cream, covered in chocolate sauce and ready to be eaten.

Then my mom would bring out sleeping bags so we could all sleep on the football field. We would watch the stars go by and talk about our current life, our hobbies and everything that we had a desire to talk about. When the moon was strong, and the stars starred singing, we would quietly drift off to sleep, aided by the solemn stars singing quietly impossible to hear songs that have the sound of a dying galaxy, about to reach the end of it’s life. And so we could say the beautiful stars have sung to us the pleading song of death. The day is gone and the night rules. The end of a fun day has just begun and so have the beautiful stars.
byTB



AW16 Lantern

Food
Pizza
Melting cheese
Superior
Gone
by MD


Surf
Barrels
Sandy beach
People crusing
Waves
by NM




AW19 Free Verse Poem

LET IT RAIN
by MA


AS I RUN THRU THE FIELD
AND BULLETS FLY BY ME
I REMEMBER MY FRIEND
SCREAMING AS HE WAS
SHOT BY A 50 CAL BLOOD
GUSHING OUT OF HIS ARM
A GRENADE LANDING IN
OUR DITCH A PRIVATE
GOING TO THROW IT BACK
TOO LATE IT EXPLODES
IN HIS HAND BLOOD LANDING
ON MY FACE AS IF IT WERE
RAINING MY CAPTAIN YELLING
TO RETREAT AS I RUN TO A
DESTROYED BUILDING I FEEL A
SUDDEN THUD AND A COLD LIQUID
ON MY HANDS I LOOK DOWN
I WAS SHOT I CONTINUE TO HEAD
TO COVER THUD SHOT
AGAIN ONLY TWO FEET FROM
COVER THE LAST THING I
SEE IS A MEDIC DRAGGING ME
TO COVER AS THE RAIN DROPS ON
MY FACE



Tofu Haiku

Tofu is squishy
Super tasty with shoyu
Square and made from soy
by BH



AW20 Dice Poem

Dice
by MS


Great for my first letter I got “G.” A
good way to start out my ‘Great’ poem.
Hurray! I got a wild! I
choose “H” I guess I I’d say this
deserves 2 hurrays!
Very interesting I got ”V,” V is in verb
as well as it is in very, or in vice!
No way, Hurray! Another wild card
I guess I’ll choose “N” for I haven’t had it yet!
Oh my gosh! For my last letter I got “O”
Like a big doughnut. Okay that’s
all for today, (I hope I get an “A”)

Reading is awesome
Enough to get your mind on the roll
Far enough to make your mind go on an imaginary journey
Exciting enough to be like sugar
The end is the saddest part.
by RI




AW22 Unexpected Valentine

Dear Virus,
I love you so much!
You help me steal people's
credit card numbers and
personal information.
Without you I couldn't be a
computer robber and a
billionaire!
Thanks!
Thanks!
Thanks!
So much,
Computer robber
by NY

Dear Soup,
I love when I pick you up
like a shovel picks up dirt,
and you keep me warm.
You are so hot because
you just got cooked.
When I am down, you tell
me soup jokes.
Let's meet again
tomorrow.
xoxoxoxoxo, Spoon
by DC




AW24 Spy Note


Students could not use the letter A and had to disguise their correspondence as an ordinary note.

Yo Bennett,
You could come over to my house. We could go to the movies, plus we could get popcorn, Then we could go to the shore while throwing the old pigskin. Then we could to in the pool and shoot hoops.
From,
J-dog


Hey dude,
Sup. Surf's good in Honolulu. Come over here. C'mon. It's fun. DUDE JUST COME. Or you could come over and prey in my mystic box. But don't bring Mr. Sendybolls.
See you dude,
TT





5th & 6th Grade Writing 2008-2009

(Names have been abbreviated to initials.)


BLUES

ENDING SUMMER BLUES
by CN

I'm counting down the days till back to school
I'm hoping I don't be a dork or a big giant fool
New school, new friends, and new teacher
Sometimes I feel like they're all scary creatures
My summer was long and full of joy
I'm hoping this school year will be one I enjoy
I'm missing my friends so far away
I'm wishing they all could come and stay
Feeling like I got those ending summer blues
I wonder if life will give me a set of clues
Some people like to go back to school
I'm one of those people who'd rather stay in a pool
I know the future will be great
But sometimes I wish school could wait.



FORTUNATELY / UNFORTUNATELY

HOMEWORK ASSIGNMENT
by NU

Fortunately, today the homework was worth extra points in both classes and was really easy.
Unfortunately, my dog chewed it up.
Fortunately, I was able to tape it.
Unfortunately my nephew drew on it with a pencil.
Fortunately, I was able to erase it.
Unfortunately, it was so crumpled up my parent thought it was trash and threw it away.
Fortunately, they said it was in the outside garbage can.
Unfortunately, by the time I got outside it was getting thrown away by the garbage truck.
Fortunately, I caught a ride on the back of it and fished it out.
Unfortunately, it smelled like rotten egg.
Fortunately, I had a stain and odor remover specially made for papers.
Unfortunately, it still had a rip.
Fortunately, I decided to give up.
Fortunately, I got a new one and finished it in the morning.


A DAY AT THE BEACH
by TW

One day my mom, dad, and brother went to the beach...
The good thing was that I didn't forget anything at home.
The bad thing was that the beach was really crowded.
The good thing was that the water was sparkling.
The bad thing was there were box jellyfish in the water.
The good thing was that they had an ice cream stand.
The bad thing was that the ice cream started to melt once I got it.
The good thing was that my dad packed extra snacks.
The bad thing was that he packed vegetables.
The good thing was that I got to lay out in the sun.
The bad thing was that I forgot to put on sunscreen.
The good thing was that my mom brought a big umbrella.
The bad thing was that it had a big hole in it.
But the best thing of all,
The thing that topped it all off was...

THAT I GOT TO BE WITH MY FAMILY!



WHEN I WAS...

WHEN I WAS YOUNG IN SAMOA
by EP

When I was young in Samoa, my dad would come home tired and exhausted and save his last minty kiss for my sister and me. Sometimes he would go out onto our piece of land and check on our dogs to make sure that they're ok and secured. My uncles would come home from work and I'd ask nicely and really politely to turn on my most memorable movie.

When I was young in Samoa, my mom would cook up some really good oka and fish, and we would gather kalo or taro from our garden that my mom planted and eat it instead of white rice. Sometimes my grandmother would come down from the island of 'Oahu and bring some baby milk or powder for my mom because in Samoa they didn't have really good resourcements.

When I was young in Samoa, I would go and get silver pans for my mom so that she would wash my pig, Matilda. My pig was so fat from eating all her little pebbles, and she would just grow and grow. Sometimes she'd eat so much that we had to wash her with our hose. But sometimes she'd just take up all the water so we wouldn't have enough water so that I could shower in that Rubbermaid yellow cooler.

When I was young in Samoa, I would usually go to my next-door neighbor's house and ask for some pisupo (corn beef). Sometimes we would come daily and he'd run out, so he'd have to take a little errand to the supermarket and grab more corn beef for our supper. Sometimes I'd eat too much and have to throw-up some of my dinner.

When I was young in Samoa, I would sit in my bed and pray to the Lord for the great day I had!



RECIPE

Recipe for the Best Day Ever!
From the Kitchen of CI


Ingredients
•A cup of sunshine
•10 slices of watermelon
•25 big juicy blueberries
•A package of best friend
•A gallon of sleepover
•A tablespoon of a ride to the mall
•A ton of shopping
A can of no siblings
•A handful of friendship
•A splash of laughter

Directions
Pour the cup of sunshine and the package of best friends into a big bowl. Add the gallon of sleepover and the can of no siblings after the handful of friendship. On a cutting board, slice the watermelon into tiny strips. Put the strips into a bowl and add the blueberries. Next, combine the tablespoon of a ride to the mall and the ton of shopping to the blueberries and watermelon. Next, beat and whip the contents that are in the smaller bowl until they turn into a thick cream. Lastly, add the the ton of shopping and the splash of laughter to the large bowl. Then put the mix into the oven at 350º for 60 minutes.


How to Get into Trouble
From the Kitchen of MM


Ingredients:
A dash of boys
A ton of naughtiness
A handful of students
A teaspoon of teasing
A teacher
A dark rainy day
A teaspoon of bullying
A ton of hitting or kicking

Directions:
First, you will put the handful of students and a dash of boys and a dash of a teacher into a bowl. Add a ton of naughtiness on a dark rainy day. You take the ton of hitting or kicking and the teaspoon of bullying and pour it into the bowl. After you put it into the bowl, you chop of the teaspoon of teasing. Sprinkle it into the bowl and then you're done with the recipe.



PERSONIFICATION

SATURDAY
by MC


Saturday's crazy
He likes
football
video games
walking his dog
He plunders in his pool
making a magnificent
splash
getting a Dr. Pepper after
in a flash
He runs in cleats
He catches
He sacks
He runs down that
quarterback
He's drenched in Gatorade
When he goes home
he gets on those video
games
Then we go to that Hawaii
football game
He gets gyros
He gets Coke
He gets pupus
and we watch the game
till it's 9 o'clock or 10
Then he crawls into his queen
bed
Then it's nighty nite.


DREAMS

When Dogs Dream
by KB

When dogs are awake all they do is wag their tail, fetch, eat sleep and poop. But when they are asleep, the whole world changes.

When they dream there are BIG Juicy STEAKS and ch- ch- chicken. Wherever they go there is a fire hydrant to pee on. The whole world is a gynormis field to play on and to poop out that juicy steak. Also they get to sleep on that king mattress that their owners don’t let them sleep on. Now the owners have to sleep on the floor and see how they like it.

Too bad they have to go to that old usual life. But when they go back to sleep….



INTERVIEW

We used an interview format to teach facts about something.

Interviewing a Gecko
by AC

Hello, I am AC, and this is your daily report. Today we are interviewing a Gecko.

G. Hello.

A. Hello. So, why don’t you tell us about the original thing about geckos that provoked you to do this interview

G. Well, some people are always putting geckos down as being exactly like lizards, and we are not. What sets us apart is that we geckos make chirping sounds to socially interact with each other. We also have no eyelids and instead have a transparent membrane that we lick clean

A. Are there any other physical characteristics that are unique to geckos?

G. Yes, our toes are padded so we can hang from our feet alone. We are so strong that we can support about eight times our weight while hanging from smooth glass. Another thing is that my feet are self-cleaning.

A. I heard that you were in a traumatic incident with a photographer over the weekend, can you tell us about that?

G. Yes, I can. Well, some people were taking pictures of me for a magazine. They were really annoying me, so I got ready, and emitted a bad smelling odor. It made them go away. Some other geckos said I should’ve dropped my tail instead. That is another gecko defensive maneuver.

A. Is there anything else you would like to say on behalf of geckos?

G. Yes. If you see a gecko outside, do not bother us. We want to be peaceful creatures, so do not anger us!

A. Well, that’s all the time we have. Goodbye!



WRITING PROMPT

The topic was to write about getting a new pet.

My New Pet
by CT

I finally got the courage to ask my mom for a new pet and guess what, she said yes. My dad thought it was a bad idea because it might poop around my house, but I said it’s a good way to teach me to be responsible. My dad finally gave in after my mom gave him the “Talk.”

The talk is when my mom persuades my dad to do something she wants.

Mom said she would take me to the animal shelter tomorrow in the afternoon. I could hardly wait.

The next morning I woke, brushed my teeth, washed my face, and took a bath. I ran down stairs and woofled down my breakfast. When I was done eating I looked up at the clock and it was only 6:00, I have five hours to wait. I found a pet’s ad in side the newspaper. When my mom came down a few minutes later she saw me looking at the pet ad. I wanted to see what pets they had in the shelter. The pet I really wanted that was a dragon. Sure there was a bunch of other cool pets, but this was the coolest.

When it was close to lunchtime my mom said, “Let’s go to pick up your new pet,” I was so excited. I got to the pet shelter at about 1:30. The lady took me to the pet room; but to my surprise the store was actually a jungle. The lady who works at the pet store gave us a tour.

The first animal I saw was a gorilla. I pet it was super hairy and it had a few ticks. The gorilla also looked like it was going to eat me. That monster was super scary. It was no dragon.

I then saw a baby puppy. He was so cute with his big eyes on his small little face. His bark was so annoying and my mom hates the dogs’ bark with their small tiny voice. My mom and I said “NO” at the exact same time the lady who works at the pet store offered. Still no dragon yet.

Then the craziest thing happened I saw a unicorn. Mom was so excited she always wanted a unicorn always when she was a child. Mom was about to get it for me, but the lady who works at the pet store said it had a disease, I was so relieved. I was getting mad because I couldn’t find a dragon.

When I was walking a 17ft. cobra grabbed my mom's purse so. I could see the smooth skin of the cobra. After about 30 seconds the lady that works at the pet store said a word to make the cobra let go.

She said “Pizza.”

I was just about to give up and tell my mom to get the gorilla, with the ticks.

Just then the lady who works at the animal store said, “I have one more room to show you.”

I wasn’t too excited because the day I just had was crazy and it was just about to get crazier. When the lady who works at the pet store brought us inside the next room it was full of dragons.

Some dragons were big, some were small, some were old, and some were young. The dragon I really wanted was a dragon named Fire. Fire was so cute and young. I pet Fire, and the scales were super smooth.

I told my mom this was the pet I wanted. She disagreed super fast.

I said, “This is the pet I really wanted.”

Mom nodded her head up and down and said, “Alright.”

Mom got me Fire and I knew he thought this is my new home. When we were walking home, I thought in my head that the poop was least of my problems, the fire was on the top of my list.



by NU

I have been wanting a pet for years I’ve been working it into conversations that had nothing to do with pets at all for exmple if my mom says “How was your day at school?” I would say “ Oh it was fine but I think it would really help me if you let me get a study buddy, someone furry with floppy ears? My mom would say “Maybe later.”

One night at dinner I said “ Mom, dad could I please please please have a little furry buddy that will lick my face when I come home and jump on my legs when he wants to play, you know how much I’ve always wanted one.” I said with a grin on my face that looked like a please can I have one please kind of look. Then my dad said “ You can have one when you show us you can and you are willing to pay for the equipment needed to take care of your little friend.” Then I said “ok”,finished my dinner and went to go wash the dishes. He was he was really saying that I could have one if I would pay for it I could get a pet. But I didn’t know that.

I went out to the pet store and looked at all the prices of the leash, chew toys, cage for when he was being a bad but cute little puppy, the water bowl, food bowl, and the pet food. I never thought it would be so much after I added all of the prices together I found it was $102.75 all together. I thought I would never be able to pay it all but I was by looking at what I saved up it was about $75 dollars all together I didn’t think I could do it but I was able to earn enough money after I did about 20 chores. I showed my parents I was ready by buying all of the materials, and getting them set up and making sure he wasn’t in a place that would get into peoples way. Once my parents saw that they couldn’t say no and that’s were a story with a friend began.

We reached the pet store. I opened the door by turning a cold clammy handle, I heard the barks of at least twenty dogs and one of them was going to come home with me today. I saw all kinds of dogs some stray, some have been here all their lives some were new born some were quite old. I saw golden retrivers that looked like golden smiles staring back at me., dalmations that looked like peace and war coliding together but peace still winning, malteise who looked like snow gently falling to earth, chihuahuas letting their little voices out so everyone can hear them, pomeranians who just looked like big puff balls but still so cute, great danes standing tall and proud of themselves even thought they were still just minute puppies, and all other sorts of puppies that I’ve never even heard of. There were bunnies to I can’t quite cearly remember the exact names of them so I’ll just describe them to you. A few had long and floppy ears, some others had sliky coats, some were brown with white dots some with black dots and one with a brown body but just one very light brown ear. There were cats to some were just found and still being cleaned so they would look more appealing to sell, some were tabbys orange and white little kitties roaming around in their cage meowing to their hearts content and some white cats to their fur had not a speck of dirt like clear water. My parents said to choose whoever I liked and I did, immediatley I knew I wanted a dalmation my friend had a golden retriver, my sister has a malteise I had a chihuahua my other fried has a pomeranian, and there was this great dane that always came down our street every morning walking tall and high like is the best dog in the world, almost taller than the owner and bunnies, they're really cute but well not to much to do with them, and cats unfortunatley I’m allergic. So I picked up all of the dalmation puppies there was about five of them I picked up each of them to see which one of them felt right. I was getting discouraged once I picked up all but one of the puppies. thought my buddy wasn’t in there but I thought I should pick up the last puppy just to make sure. This puppy was a very small one I immediately said “ This one!” then my mother said “are you sure?” and I said “ Yes! this puppy is perfect she's calm, sweet, furry, barely barks except if she can sense a mean stranger, she is a spotted dog with a black dot around her eye, this is definitely the perfect dog!” I said with a huge grin on my face.

We bought her and got in the car then my mom said “What are you going to name her?” and I said “Hmmmm I haven’t really thought about that one. Well I’ve always thought of a dog as a buddy so I think I’ll name her Buddy.” “Buddy? Are you sure it seems like a pretty plain name.” dad said as I caressed her fur then I said “Well lets see if she likes it.” Then I said “ Hey girl do you like the name buddy?” She barked happily and I said to my dad “ She likes it.” Then we all went home and I showed Buddy around her new home and even though she had a bed she slept with me that night until she was to big to sleep with me any more but she still slept next to my bed so we ended up having to move her bed next to mine. Then for as long as she lived she always kept active, she was very playful and loved playing fetch, tug-o-war,and just running around in the park. I think if I could have another dog I would want a golden retriever puppy.




PRAYER POEM

Prayer of the Pig
by NS


Dear God
I pray for good
slop and good mud.
Please make my owner not eat me
or turn me into bacon.
I am good
Please keep me safe amen.


ACROSTIC

Spam Musubi
by BH


So tasty
Packed in a can
Addictive
Meat

Makes you obese
U will like it
Shaped like a brick
U can afford it
Buy it at 7 Eleven
It is a awesome snack


Fireworks
by DH


Flirting
Inferno
Rising sparks
Engaging light into the night
Wires
Outraging
Right and left
Kites in fiery
Sparks


STARBUCKS POEMS

At the Zoo
by EA


When I went to the Zoo
I heard things
Like lions roaring in the silence of morning
Did you hear that?
I smelled things
Like elephant dung. (It stunk.)
Did you smell that?
I saw things
Like monkeys playing around on their playground.
Did you see that?
I tasted things
Like shave ice. (It’s so good I bought it twice.)
Did you taste that?
I felt things
Like the goat’s scruffy fur. (I wish he’d purr.)
Did you feel that?
I had fun at the zoo!!!
How bout you?


Earthquake
by MC


Earthquakes
are god’s might and power
he is pummeling the earth
quaking every road,
building,
house with his fist.
Creating a cleft in the ground
seeping down into the great abyss
Sending buildings down to hell’s gates…

Then there’s stillness
all that’s left are demolished buildings
and rubble
you can hear faint baby cries
blinded and petrified by the aftershock.
You wipe your face and cough
from all the dust in the air
you look around and find the dead
you start to weep
you will never underestimate
god again.



DEAR PHIL

Dear Philly,
You’ve been so great at predicting winter or spring. I think you’ve been very helpful and thoughtful for thinking of us. But here’s the deal though, you should probably make us have SIX MORE WEEEKS OF WINTER! No, I’m not being selfish. I’m actually trying to convince you to help other people.

Here are some examples. The humpback whales come to Hawaii for the winter. That could attract some tourists to Hawaii and that means more money for Hawaii. And don’t forget about the poor ice cream and shave ice. They’re all going to die!!!!!! So if you want to be helpful then GIVE US SIX MORE WEEKS OF WINTER!!!!! No pressure.

Sincerely,
Your biggest fan who WANTS SIX MORE WEEKS OF WINTER!!!!

P.S. no pressure
P.S.S have fun
P.S.S.S SIX MORE WEEKS OF WINTER!

Bye!
TW


SKY WRITING

by MC

Day 1
Rugged
Gloomy
Murkey
Dreary

Day 2
Cobalt
Pulpy
Tranquil
Soothing

Day 3
Cheerless
Faint
Luminescent
Shut in

Day 4
Fluffy
Slushy
Sparkling
Baby-Blue

Day 5
Leeway
Untroubled
Jolly
Crisp

Day 6
Creamy
Velvety
Fluffy
Yawning

Day 7
Shoddy
Colorless
Gray
Dull

Day 8
Dim
Calm
Little glint
Flat

Day 9
Little Clouds
Bright blue
Luster
Benevolent

Day 10
Six helicopters
Fluffy clouds
Emerald blue
Hot